So, I've pretty much abandoned my Free Fiction Friday idea; try as I might, I just can't write short stories often enough. Not ones that I'm happy with, anyway. I'll still post free stories here, though, just not along any particular schedule. I'll probably repost some of the free stories I've deleted here too. And I've got tons of WIPs that I can post as well.
Anyway, my big question to you all right now is about my next Ebook. I've been tinkering around with a few ideas, but I want to see what you all would prefer.
I've had this big story about a secret society of plastic surgeons, who use their skills to transform women into elaborate, bizarre new forms, brewing in my head for a while now.
I'm not just talking about more of the standard body-mods I've done in past stories; breast implants, tattooing, piercing, and so on. I'm talking total body alterations, with amputations, full body tattoos, women turned into furniture or used as appliances. I briefly touched on a few of the less extreme ideas in the Angela's Last Resort series, especially the second and third books, the titcams in particular. So if you've read those books, you might have an idea of what I'm talking about.
My vision is more akin to Benson's artworks, if you are familiar with him; very extreme body modifications, basically. I've got ideas ranging from women turned into permanent statues through rigid bondage and training, to art decorations, to living mermaids and ponygirls.
However, I can just feel that this sort of story will take a while to write and probably monopolize my time for a good several weeks, if not more. My plot idea is only partly worked out, but I think I have enough to get started, if there is interest.
So, my question to you all is, what would you like to see next? This epic body mod story, or more of my normal stuff? I could focus my time writing a sequel to The Plastic Surgeon's Revenge, as I've got the basic plot worked out already. It would continue the story with some forced exercise, more surgical alterations, general femdom, etc. But nothing as far-out as my big concept story would.
Please let me know what your preferences in the comments. If I focus my time on one particular idea, I think I can be more productive in the long run. But I'd like to spend my time working on something I knew you'd all enjoy. If amputations, and bizarre alterations like that seem too much to you, let me know, please. :-)
- Tabitha Kohls
I think the epic body mod story idea is fantastic. I would love to see more hardcore body modifications, but if you end up writing more of your usual I would still enjoy that to.
ReplyDeletePlease please please epic body modification! I love the often bizzare and twisted and would love to see you write something along those lines...go for it!
ReplyDeleteI'd love to see Ro-Sham-Bimbo part2. There are so many options and outcomes that you could hit on a bunch more fetishes and humiliating changes. Preferably would like to see extreme vulgar tattooing and X-large sex toy fetish in the next show among other changes.
ReplyDeleteI've got a lot of ideas left over for more penalties, so I'll probably make a standalone sequel. Probably sooner, rather than later, in fact.
Delete- Tabby
Would love to see an ending to Angela's last resort
ReplyDeleteWell, I actually have a beginning scene already finished for ALR4, but I can't quite decide how to finish the tale once she returns home. Part of me wants her to get one over on Jeffrey, cause he's a little shit.
DeleteAnd then again, part of me wants her to be trapped in a perpetual gangbang with her naughtier students... So hard to decide ;-)
- Tabby
Benson's "Stepford Bound" book is indeed still one of my top favorite fetish creations, although I must admit I always enjoyed the..."social objectification" that was emphasized not only by the body modifications, but also the clothing, daily activities, and lesson plans for the schoolgirls/wives, then the more hardcore furniture/pet transformations.
ReplyDeleteA young Stepford girl out on a casual date with a boy:
http://g.e-hentai.org/s/124d8abefc/259562-37
A proper Stepford wife, and her daughter who is still learning at school how to be one:
http://g.e-hentai.org/s/485ff32661/259562-44
That being said, however, I'm certainly not opposed to reading some of the more extreme ideas that you've been holding back so far, particularly if ALR is an initial example. I think that as long as there's still some sort of interactivity, and the woman isn't reduced to being near-mindless so that some sort of regular humiliation/objectification experience is still present, then I'll still enjoy it.
I've got a small portion of the big bodymod story written so far, just a little peak into one transformed woman's daily life. Not really plot related, but definitely along your lines of interest. :-) I'll probably post it sometime in the next week or so.
Delete- Tabby
For me as a buyer of ALR1-3 the continuation to ALR 4 is a must. I would prefer an ending with Angela being a sextoy in the hands of Jeffrey. Otherwise I don´t like too extreme modifications like the amputation of arms and legs or the modificatioj of a girl´s mouth into a vagina.
ReplyDeleteI agree with PinkPlastic. Please finish ALR!
ReplyDeleteMy advice, Rex, is to follow your heart -- or your dick, or wherever your muse resides. If you feel that you need to get that extreme body mod story written, then go and write it.
ReplyDeleteAmputations and suchlike don't appeal to me, but here is a thought: what if a group of mad surgeons had acquired a group of paraplegic, quadriplegic and amputee women for their experiments, rationalizing that a woman who previously had legs which did not walk is better off with a tail that can actually swim (with motors activated by nerve impulses, perhaps). The women might not agree with their assessment, of course.
I'm sure you are aware that many of the kinksters you run into online are severely disabled. One of the kinkiest I ever met was a woman who lives in a nursing home and cannot walk and can use her arms only for a few things (fortunately, including typing). I talked her through a scenario in which she was given a little electric cart so she could roll around the house in the posture and at the height of a dog. She liked the idea.
Anyway, consider that possible wrinkle to add to your story -- hmmm, maybe I should write that story....
You should! It sounds like a potentially fun tale. :-) Thanks for the advice, Doc.
Delete- Tabby
Dang, no more Freebie Fridays? That's why I stopped by today! Oh well, it was fun while it lasted - thanks for sharing. I enjoy all of the mod ideas you mention above.
ReplyDeleteI do plan to post more free stories, as time goes by. In fact, I'm planning to post some excerpts from one of my biggest WIP tomorrow, and probably new parts each Friday for a few weeks.
Delete- Tabby
I'm always in for epic bodymodifications in stories. Preferably surgically. Piercings and chains, heavy tattooing and body alterations. I liked your AWM, PWN and ALR very much :-)
ReplyDeleteIf you want a bit of inspiration, perhaps you want to take a look at
"'Tis the Season" and "Out of the Frying Pan and into the Fire" series from Musker.
These are stories well over a decade old, yet suprisingly "fresh" in todays various comparative erotic literature.
TTS Part 5 describes a tale about reshaping a woman
http://www.asstr.org/files/Authors/tedebear/Other_Authors/Musker/TisTheSeason05.txt
OFPF part 6 describes a gem of a tale about for one thing, racial change. Something you don't see very often.
http://www.asstr.org/files/Authors/sinner/BimboSlutz/Musker/OUTOF6.TXT
As for amputations.. it really depends on the level and overall setting.
"Amputating" hair on the other hand ;-)
Ooh, thanks for the links. Yes, I've read Musker's tales, but only ages ago. My vision for the epic bodymod story is especially similar to the woman in Tis The Season Chapter 5; transformed into a playtoy via surgery, training, corsets, and various degrees of intense bondage.
DeleteI'm currently working on and off with this tale, I still don't have any major plot planned out. I've written a few parts, just excerpts of some of the women reacting to their transformed lives. I might post a few pieces sometime soon, just to see everyone's reactions.
But right now I'm working on finishing my Chief Executive Bimbo story, which I posted a WIP of a few months back.
- Tabby
I have always been a tremendous fan of punk/goth transformations of straight-laced women. A bad girl on probation joins a gang, they kidnap her uptight female probation officer (or former teacher/counselor/etc), tattoo her, pierce her, give her a mohawk or other extreme hair style, and through blackmail or other Macguffin she has to join the gang herself and become an utter slut, (breast enlargement and slut-wear during the corruption phase) and at some point the protagonist becomes convinced that she wants the new lifestyle, possibly resulting in serial transformation as the previously uptight character is now more depraved than the original antagonist, and she herself chooses someone to turn into a punked out slut.
ReplyDeleteOooh, that does sound fun!
DeleteI've had this old idea of a very arrogant, uptight female police officer being turned into a bimbo/streetslut by her jealous, lazy male colleagues.
I've been planning just having her put onto an undercover operation as a streetwalker to catch a dangerous pervert terrorizing the local whore population, and being forced into transforming herself to fit the part. But maybe having her try to arrest a local girl-gang, and getting in over her head would be even more fun. A sequel of sorts to Amy's Whore Makeover.
Adding a punkish element to her transformation might be fun too, a spiky hair mohawk, nasty tattoos on the sides of her head, using her own badge to brand her bottom... Perhaps even some degree of forced drug addiction, used to manipulate her behavior to permanently join the gang. Hmm....
Thanks for the comment, Dark Z, very inspiring ideas! :-)
- Tabby
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DeleteLoved reading The Plastic Surgeon's Revenge.A sequel would be most welcome.
ReplyDeleteI'm late to the party, but I thought I'd add that I don't really like mutilation. Cutting off arms/legs and the like just squik me out. On the other hand, unwanted brands, tattoos, piercings are all just hunky-dory!
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