(UPDATE: This week's free story has now been removed, though I'm keeping the post up to save the comments. Thank you to all who have viewed and commented on this tale. - Tabitha)
Here's my Valentine's Day free tale, a week late. I wrote this pretty much in one go, and it ended up taking a very different turn from my original idea, but hopefully you'll still enjoy it.
Anyway, it could probably do with a major rewrite, but as is, I'm pretty happy with the end result. It's almost cute, by my standards, which is oddly appropriate giving the holiday theme.
The new story is after the break, as usual.
Very good I like the falling in love with her arse bit
ReplyDelete"...writing love poems to her ass, taking it out for a night at the movies...", loved that part. If he had arrows that worked that way for chests too, I'd love it even more, but the reveal is still great the way it is.
ReplyDeleteAlso, that's a very nice surprise twist at the end, with Cupid suddenly needing to re-aim.
I'd be interested to know about some of the other "specialty" arrows. Which of course makes me start thinking about Green Arrow and Hawkeye. I wonder what Cupid's boxing-glove arrow would do....
ReplyDelete[Any chance I could be relieved of having to do Captchas?]